Friday, July 28, 2017

雅思7分作文的语法是这样的(一)

雅思7分作文的语法要求是:结构的多样性和复杂性。

什么是多样性,什么是复杂性,我们先来分析一篇范文 。 

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 

A sample answer:
The relative importance of natural talent and training(复合主语)is a frequent topic of discussion when 时间状语从句)people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music

Obviously,education systems are based on the belief that 同位语从句all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills,including现在分词短语) those associated with sport, art or music.  So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that (同位语从句)a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice. 

However,some people believe that宾语从句) innate talent is what differentiates a person who (定语从句has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who (定语从句)become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and(并列句 this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices. (让步从句)

I personally think that (宾语从句,)some people do have talents that 定语从句are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that 定语从句 allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. while引导从句)But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive.(简单句)Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars 三个并列主语)have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent.(简单句)Without the natural talent, continuous training would (would虚拟语气)be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, (并列平行结构)the child would (would虚拟语气) not learn how to exploit and develop their talent. how to 短语作宾语

In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is  required.  (but 引导并列句)

这里面所出现的句法有:

  1. 复合的主语、宾语(两个或两个以上的并列名词或名词短语)
  2. simple sentence 简单句 (只有一个谓语动词)
  3. compound sentence 并列句(and, but 等连接)
  4. complex sentence 复合句(常见从句,如宾语从句,定语从句,表语从句,状语从句)
  5. passive voice 被动语态
  6. model verbs 情态动词 (can, could, would, may等)

这些语法都是高中语法知识,实在没有什么高级的语法,并且这还是考官的范文。

对于语法,实在没必要迷信;只要没有基本语法错误,比如单复数,主谓一致等,能写出基本的简单句和从句,语法单项就不会低于6分。

7分的要求就是灵活运用上述提到的句子结构,通过句子的翻译练习,1-2周即可以完成语法的学习。

没有什么高分语法结构,因为即使你背下来,考试也未必用得到,因为这是本末倒置的做法。

Ideas  come first, organization second, and then vocabulary and grammar. 

所有的复杂句子,都是由最简单的句子simple sentence演变而来。

接下来Allen会给大家展示,如何由简单句写出各种复杂的句子。


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