如果你的汉语思维就是简单的：今天我很高兴。
那么你脱口而出的句子也会很简单： I am so happy today. (5个单词)
但是这样的句子是不完整的，会让大家有疑问：为什么高兴？ 于是你可以比较完整的说：那是因为我收到了大学的录取通知了。于是这个句子就变成了这样子：
I am so happy today because I received my college offer. （11个单词）
但是这样的回答依然缺少必要的细节，比如：什么时候收到？ 早上？还是我中午？几点钟？
I am so happy today because I received my college offer at 9 o'clock in this morning. (17个单词)
还可以接着问：怎么收到的？信差还是电子邮件？
I am so happy today because I received my college offer at 9 o'clock in this morning by email. (19个单词)
最关键的问题，哪一个大学呀？哈佛大学还是一所普通社区大学？
I am so happy today because I received my college offer from Harvard at 9 o'clock in this morning by email. (21个单词)
只是你一个人高兴还是全家都为你高兴呢？
I am so happy today because I received my college offer from Harvard at 9 o'clock in this morning by email and all my family members are so proud of me. (31个单词)
这就是一个句子，从5个单词扩展到31个单词。单词很简单，但语法绝对是雅思7分级别的语法了。
因此，要想写出长句子，必须先让自己的思维起飞，让自己的思维更完整，而不是碎片化。
我们再来看一个例子。
孩子可以得到更好的照顾。
Children could be taken good care of. (7个单词)
继续问下去，得到谁的照顾，老师还是家长？
Children could be taken good care of by their parents.(10个单词)
哪些孩子得到父母好的照顾？在学校上学还是在家上学呢？
Children who study at home could be taken good care of by their parents.(14个单词)
得到父母照顾当然不错，难道没有弊端吗？任何事物都有两个方面，在家上学的孩子失去了和其他孩子玩耍和交往的机会。
Children who study at home could be taken good care of by their parents, but those homeschooling students may lose the opportunity to play and socialise with other children. (29个单词)
雅思写作的句子不需要太长，最长不要超过30个单词，15到25个字最好，整个作文基本控制在15-18句话，很容易写到250字。
只要学会基本的句子连接的手段，写出7分的雅思句子其实很简单。
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